Wednesday 16 March 2016

Writing

WALT write an introduction for a Narrative by describing the scene and setting. Think of a sentence that would invite a reader into this image.

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  1. I watch the clouds creep across the patchy white hills

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  2. Snowy rocky hills small house mesy

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  3. there was a lonely house and it was surrounded by white snowy Rocky Mountain .

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  4. Right as my car runs out of gas I reach the hut, I walk inside my stomach burning of hunger I light the paraffin burner and cook the sausages, one mealtime later, I go to look at the view the mountains are covered top to bottom in snow.

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  5. As I finally reach the hut, I looked inside and there was a nice, soft, comfy couch sitting waiting for me. "Aaaah just what I needed" I sighed and slowly started drifting off to sleep.

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  6. The snowy hills are really tall and the hut is cold and hard

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  7. As I climed up the hill I saw a little shack sitting on the hill so I slid down the hill and ran over to it and I made my self a cup of tea and then had a nap.

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  8. The snowy hills are really tall and the hut is cold and hard

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  9. I yawned, fresh air was just the thing I needed. It was freezing but I couldn't resist going outside. The tall, snowy mountains guarded the grass roofed shack I was staying in.

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  10. As I look up I see a patchy clouds smoothly crossing the moutains.

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  11. As I came through the valley with my horse the cold winds were blowing in my face. When I reached my hut it was cosy and warm.

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  12. As I reached my way over the last rocky snowy mountain I stumbled into a wooden rackety house.

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  13. The rickerdy house was sitting on the green grass with the snowy hills behind it.

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  14. Near by there was a cottage surrounded with mountains and the beautiful blue cloudy sky.

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  15. The sight of the shack made me shiver. It seemed haunted, a grass roof,cobwebs and old wooden walls. The mountains acted as a guard around the shack, snow climbing down.

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  16. One shinny sunny morning the patchy clouds are moving slowly above the hard Rocky Mountains.

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  17. On the green tall mountains was a old little cottage surrounded by snowy and rocky Mountains.

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  18. I see the bright yellow sun shine across the little cottage and the snowy mountains

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  19. As I see the lovely blue sky's and the smooth,Rocky and snowy Mountains with a little old cottage down by the mountains with a bright green grass.

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